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Lagoons by ~x0xtarjax0x:iconx0xtarjax0x:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Lagoons of tears
Had dried at last,
And shadowed voices faded.
Pace of the world,
Moving too fast,
A broken mind jaded.
The swampy texture
Of the mind
And words like sinking sand
Have yet to release,
And yet to find
The righteous heaven-hand.
The oceans deep,
And lakes too dark,
The maze of the destruction,
And in the ear,
Ask if a lark,
Cooing the reaction.
©2008 ~x0xtarjax0x
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Heh...I don't even know if my boyfriend will be able to tell exactly what this poem is about. I must admit, even I am not too sure about its exact meaning and significance. But I do understand vaguely. Haha. This seems nonsensical at first, but it has ties, perhaps only if you know me very well you'll be able to tell at least the feeling of this poem. But I don't guarantee it. Haha...

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~Your-So-Cliche:iconYour-So-Cliche: Jun 13, 2008, 6:31:37 PM
i love it!
and it has a beautiful flow too! lol

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